哥哥姐姐,念我一片赤诚,帮我的英文润色一下吧,哪里有语法错的摘出原句旁边红笔订正,写的不好的您也帮帮yea,iknow,it'shardtofindajobintheus.especiallyafterthefinancialcrisis.traininghorse,isn'ti

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哥哥姐姐,念我一片赤诚,帮我的英文润色一下吧,哪里有语法错的摘出原句旁边红笔订正,写的不好的您也帮帮
yea,i know ,it's hard to find a job in the us.especially after the financial crisis .training horse ,isn't it hard i can feel that you are happy to train them from you sentence.as for me ,my future job is becoming a boss ,coz i can have more free time and money ,i needn't to see other people 's face or mood .i know it's a sweet dream ,but i will work hard to complete it .then i can feed many lovers it's every man 's dream .haha (∩_∩).iam joking take care

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Yeah, I know. It's not easy to find a good job in US, especially after the financial crisis. Training horses, isn't it hard? I can feel that you are happy to train them from your sentences. As for me, my future job is becoming a boss, for I can earn more free time and money. Besides, I don't need to see others' face or mood. I know it's only a sweet dream, but i will work hard to achieve it. After I get it, I can have many serect lovers, because it's every man's dream. haha. JK.