各位英语专家帮下下忙.呵呵呵.Ⅱ.改写病句（15points,3pointseach）Correcttheerrorsinthefollowingsentences.Example:Afterseeinganoffensivemouthwashadontelevision.Iresolvednevertobuythatbrandagain.Afterseeingan

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各位英语专家帮下下忙.呵呵呵.
Ⅱ.改写病句（15 points,3 points each）
Correct the errors in the following sentences.
Example:After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television.I resolved never to buy that brand again.
After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television,I resolved never to buy that
brand again.
11.In summer,Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome she felt it was too hot there.
12.Shakespeare wrote comedies,tragedies,romances,and the plays which were based on historical events.
13.While driving on Blueberry Avenue yesterday afternoon,a tree fell toward Jack’s car.
14.One of Jenny’s greatest joys in life is eating desserts.Such as milkshake,cookies or strawberry cake.
15.Peter ordered the meal for his friends ranging from fried shrimp to chopped beef.

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11.In summer,Juanna didn't like traveling in rome because she felt it was too hot there.
12.Shakespeare wrote comedies,tragedies,romances,and plays which were based on historical events.
13.While driving on Blueberry Avenue yesterday afternoon,a tree fell towards Jack's car
14.One of Jenny's greatest joys in lie is eating desserts such as milkshake,cookies,and strawberry cake
15.Peter ordered the meal for his friends that ranged from fried shrimp to chopped beef.
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