英语高手请看一下哪种说法好?以前用的昵称,像是冰暖沙拉,自己诹的,当时感觉还挺美,好听的名字,后来便觉得烂透了,没有意义.最后是感觉俗到家了,人都是这样成长的吧.版本一：Beforethenick

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英语高手请看一下哪种说法好?
以前用的昵称,像是冰暖沙拉,自己诹的,当时感觉还挺美,好听的名字,后来便觉得烂透了,没有意义.最后是感觉俗到家了,人都是这样成长的吧.
版本一：Before the nickname, like ice warm salad, choose their own, then feel positively America, the name sounds good, they would feel rotten from the inside out, no significance. Popular feeling is finally coming home, so people are growing it.
版本二：The nicknames which were used before, such as ice warm salad called by oneself, were considered beautiful and orphean names. Then it became bad and without meaning. At last, it even felt the worst. People are growing up all like this.

Answer 1

the second one is better!
以前的 用before貌似不是很准备
用which were used before 更准备些也更地道些!