英语短文改错、提高质量,todayisJune5,2012It'sMondaytoday.Wehadafulldayofclasses.Becansenearingexam,manyteachersarenotinclass.weshouldstayinclassroomtoreviewourcourse.写写就不想写了,感觉不懂要怎么样

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英语短文改错、提高质量,
today is June 5,2012
It's Monday today.We had a full day of classes.Becanse nearing exam,many teachers are not in class.we should stay in classroom to review our course.写写就不想写了,感觉不懂要怎么样才能提高自己的写作能力.感觉自己写的东西很幼稚,也不懂怎样才能提高自己的听力.我会遇到大神吗,谁能给我指条明路啊!that's all.

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today is June 5,2012
It's Monday today.We had classes all the day long.Because the exam was near,many teachers were not in the classroom.But we had to stay in the classroom to review the courses that had been learned.
其实还是不错的,大方向没错,基本说出了你想说的.多读一些东西你的写作就会有提高,告诉你,你的老师也不一定会比你写得好多少.不要泄气,你比我在你那个年纪时写得好多了.