英语翻译曾琦在抗战时期宣扬抗战必胜,同时认为政治进步是抗战胜利的前提,因此他对国民参政会的成立予以高度评价.作为参政员,曾琦在第一届参政会上提交了推进民主宪政的议案并获通过

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英语翻译
曾琦在抗战时期宣扬抗战必胜,同时认为政治进步是抗战胜利的前提,因此他对国民参政会的成立予以高度评价.作为参政员,曾琦在第一届参政会上提交了推进民主宪政的议案并获通过,同时还领导了青年党与其他在野党派相互配合发起了第一次宪政运动.第一次宪政运动失败后,曾琦对国民参政会的态度渐趋失望,以不出席抗议之.
我这个翻译的时态正确不?
zeng qi has advocated that the War must be win during the War of Resistance Against Japan.,and he also has thought the Political
progress is the premise of the victory.so He spoke highly of the establishment of the People's Political Council.as the member of
political participation,Zeng Qi has Submitted a motion in the first session of the Political Council to Promote democratic
constitutional and and it has been passed.At the same time ,he also has led the Youth Party and other opposition parties to cooperate
with each other to initiate the first constitutional movement.After the failure of the first constitutional movement,the attitude of
Zeng Qi's attitude was gradually disappointed to the National Political Council ,So he has refused to attend to protest.

Answer 1

既然是历史事件,都说的是以前发生的事,所以句中就不能出现现在时或现在完成时.改成过去时态的某种形式.