英语四级作文帮忙改错（在麻烦写出正确的语句和错误原因）~可以的话在评个分,就按四级的标准~1.一些学生不重视课本2.如何最好的利用课本Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachless

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英语四级作文帮忙改错（在麻烦写出正确的语句和错误原因）~可以的话在评个分,就按四级的标准~
1.一些学生不重视课本
2.如何最好的利用课本
Nowadays ,an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to making full use of their textbooks.Thus ,numerous based knowledge is not be learned ,and what’s worse ,a well-organized test is therefore totally impossible.
There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation For one things ,much more students give priorities to the extra-curricular subjects at the cost of making full use of their textbooks,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on hard knowledge ,in order to earn high-scores.
To change this embarrassing situation ,I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together .On the one hand,students should realize the importance of learning based knowledge and making full use of yours textbooks.On the other hand ,teachers should pay more attention to helping students how to make full use of their textbooks .Only via joint can students gain much progress in study.

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1.第一段第二行based改为basic,再去掉句中的be
2.第二段第一行much改为many,最后一行hard用difficult换一下
3.第三段第二行based改为basic,第四行去掉how,将 via joint 改为by working together.
文章总体还可以,能运用高级词汇及语法结构,长短句错落有致,得75%-85%的分问题不大.
亲,以上改动如有疑问可再进行解释.
注意：1.考试时不要为了使用高级词语或长难句而绞尽脑汁,以准确流畅自然为前提,当然也要把握时间啊.2.适当使表达多样化：）make full use of=make the most/best of=take full advantage of