英语翻译“你们公司是一家非常优秀的公司,在过去几十年里在行业里取得了非常优秀的成绩,我希望能够加入你们公司贡献价值,为贵公司在未来几十年取得跨越式发展做出自己矢志不渝的努

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英语翻译
“你们公司是一家非常优秀的公司,在过去几十年里在行业里取得了非常优秀的成绩,我希望能够加入你们公司贡献价值,为贵公司在未来几十年取得跨越式发展做出自己矢志不渝的努力,同时,我也希望和公司的各位领导、各位同事加深交流、促进沟通、深化合作,建立面向未来的和领导之间的良好的上下级关系,和同事之间的良好的伙伴关系”

Answer 1

Your company/corporation is quite excellent and has made/achieved/got a perfect progress in this field during these decades.I hope/want/expect/desire to join (accede to) your team,contributing my share ( doing my bit for your company) (devoting my power/ability to your company) and then make no effort to your company's great-leap-forward development in the near future (in the decades) .In the meantime (meanwhile) ( At the same time) ,I also expect to deepen exchanges,facilitate communications and enhance ( strengthen) coporations between leaders and colleagues (co-workers).That is to say I need to
establish a good future-oriented subordinate relationship with leaders,and (as well as可以省略)a good partnership with colleagues.
个人觉得最后一句话过于累赘.当然只是个人观点.