假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的这篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的这篇作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

Nowadays it’s fashionable for young student to have iPads. Used iPads we can listen to music download a lot of learning materials and read it. Obviously it’s of great help with our studies especial with our English listening skills.

  Some students however bring their ipads to the classroom listening to music with earphones but some even playing video games which make teachers and students greatly annoyed.

    For my opinion the classroom is a place to study and concentration was terribly needed. Therefore we should make a good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons. Meanwhile schools should make some rules instruct the students to use iPads properly.

Answer 1

Nowadays it’s fashionable for young student to have iPads. Used iPads

                              students            Using

we can listen to music download a lot of learning materials and read it . Obviously

                                                      them

it’s of great help with our studies especial with our English listening skills.

                           especially

  Some students however bring their ipads to the classroom listening to music with earphones but some even playing video games which make teachers and

           and                                makes

greatly annoyed.

For my opinion the classroom is a place to study and concentration was terribly

In                                                      is

needed.Therefore we should make a good use of iPads and other modern communication tools to help with our lessons. Meanwhile schools should make some rules  instruct the students to use iPads properly.

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