有没有英语达人来帮忙改下我写的邮件要发送很多人写得一塌糊涂好丢人是一个客诉的记录,要写成英文.我胡乱写了,觉得很啰嗦不知道有没有更好更简洁的表达.TheRootcauseisthattoomanytotes

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有没有英语达人来帮忙改下我写的邮件 要发送很多人 写得一塌糊涂好丢人
是一个客诉的记录,要写成英文.我胡乱写了,觉得很啰嗦不知道有没有更好更简洁的表达.
The Root cause is that too many totes loaded in the complained container.The last two totes,which laid on the second layer and close to back door of the container,can't be loaded in the normal way as the barrier on the top threshold of the back door.And a kind of yellow cord was ever used to fasten last two totes on the second layer and the shipment was no fastening used after last year.The last two totes in the container can't be locked and now the precaution cord was removed.This caused the slip during transpiration and damaged the totes on the ground.
This kind of cord can be stretch out and draw back in order to fasten totes as shown in below,We will use the cord after loading the last two totes tied up,and put SOP in place for loading totes in containers for export.
中文来了 请帮忙对照修改
我们以前使用过一种黄色捆扎绳来固定在第一层的这两个吨桶 但在去年由于购买不便就停止使用了 由于没有捆扎带的捆扎 这两个桶没有像以前那样很好的被固定住 从而造成了桶在运输中损坏。这种捆扎带能拉伸并全方位固定住桶 我们已重新采购并开始使用 我们的仓库人员会在每次装货后用这种捆扎带固定住最后面2个桶 使其牢固 同时已把这项要求记录在出口装货操作的Sop里。

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如果能把中文版发过来将便于对照和修改