英语翻译就在轿车离开的时候,泰勒先生从店里冲了出来,跟在车后追赶,一边还往车上扔烟灰缸、花瓶.但他已无法那些窃贼了.他们已带着价值数千镑的珠宝逃之夭夭了.Whenthecarleaved,Mrtalerus

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英语翻译
就在轿车离开的时候,泰勒先生从店里冲了出来,跟在车后追赶,一边还往车上扔烟灰缸、花瓶.但他已无法那些窃贼了.他们已带着价值数千镑的珠宝逃之夭夭了.
When the car leaved,Mr tale rushed out stop and chased the car,throwing ashtrays and vases to the car.But he can not grab these thieves,they had taken the jewels that worth several thousands pounds run away

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第一行的stop,有什么意义?你是多写了吧?应该删除.
第二行"to the car"改为"to it",因为前面一句已经有"the car"了,这里又一个,第一个句号里面就有3个"the car",太重复累赘了.
第二行"But he can not grab these thieves"的can应改为could,与前文的过去式呼应；these改为those,陈述过去的事情一般都用that,those
"several thousands pounds",没有这样的用法,要么"several thousands of pounds",要么"several thousand pounds"