假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改个，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She eit her encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．

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On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's∧hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She eit her encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．
详
1．答案fourteen改为fourteenth．考查序数词．根据句意，第十四个生日，用序数词fourteenth．
2．答案eye改为eyes．考查名词复数．in one's eyes为固定搭配，意为"在某人的眼中"．
3．答案hand-made前加a．考查冠词．其后的notebook为可数名词单数，其前必须有表示单数的冠词或数量词．根据句意，那是一本手工笔记本，故加上冠词a．
4．答案that改为which．考查非限制性定语从句．此处"my best friend Jane gave to me"为非限制性定语从句，先行词为notebook，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故that改为which．
5．答案makes改为made．考查时态．根据前文"Jane gave to me"可知，笔记本是过去送的，也是过去制作的．故makes改为过去时made．
6．答案for改为of．a picture of sb．某人的一张照片，照片上的人为其本人．for表示"给…"．根据句意，有一张Jane和我的照片，故for改为of．
7．答案tell改为tells．考查时态．根据前文的encourages可知，此句话时态为一般现在时，or为选择连词，连接两个谓语，make的时态、人称、数与encourages一致．故make改为makes．
8．答案touching改为touched．考查形容词．touching一般指物，意为"令人感动的"．touched一般指人，意为"感到感动的"．此处修饰I，指人，故touching改为touched．
9．答案wonderfully改为wonderful．考查形容词和副词．其后time为名词，意为"时光，时间"，形容词修饰名词，故wonderfully改为wonderful．
10．答案：去掉be．考查谓语动词．be动词作谓语表示"有某种属性"，此处保留礼物，用实义动词keep．一般将来时的构成：will+动词原形．故去掉be．