假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My dream is to become a school teacher in the future．In fact，I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood．In my opinion，without teachers，no society could make progresses．There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth．Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children，but they also teach children how to behave themselves．Comparing with other jobs，teaching is hard and the pay is lower．And to me，what great fun it is to be with children!They make me to feel young forever because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream．

Answer 1

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解析：
1．had前加have．考查时态．根据时间状语since my childhood 可知主句用现在完成时态，所以用have done．
2．progresses-progress．考查名词．progress 是不可数名词，所以去掉es．
3．whether-that．考查引导词．There is no doubt 表示"毫无疑问"，是肯定，所以用that引导的名词性从句，There is some doubt表示"有疑问"之后用whether引导的名词性从句．
4．children-children's．考查名词所有格．修饰growth用children's 表示孩子们的成长．
5．for-to．考查介词．pass on knowledge to children 表示传递知识给孩子们．
6．comparing-compared．考查非谓语动词．在Comparing with other jobs，teaching is hard and the pay is lower中Comparing和teaching是被动关系，所以用compared．
7．hard-harder．考查比较级．根据后句the pay is lower 的比较级，所以前句teaching is hard 也需要比较级．
8．And-But．考查连词．teaching is hard and the pay is lower和what great fun it is to be with children!是转折关系，所以用But．
9．to去掉．考查非谓语动词． make sb do sth表示"让某人做某事"，所以用They make me  feel young forever  
10．because-so．考查连词．They make me to feel young forever 是原因，I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream是结果，所以用so连接两句．