假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim

      So glad that you are interested in my new flat. Now I would like tell you something about it. Locating in the north of the city this Residential Center is small with only six building. My flat which covers the area of 36 square meters is in the fourth floor in Building 2. It consisted of a sitting room a bedroom a kitchen and a toilet. When you enter into the flat you will find yourself in the sitting room. The sitting room is the part that I like best because it is brightly with a lovely balcony which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below. Although my flat is small I like them very much because it is comfortable.

       Best regards

Yours

                                                                                                                      Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim

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enter into the flat you will find yourself in the sitting room. The sitting room is the part that I like best because it is

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brightly with a lovely balcony which I can enjoy the beautiful garden below. Although my flat is small I like them <

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very much because it is comfortable.

       

Best regards

Yours

                                                                                                                      Li Hua