假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一 个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) 并在其 下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写 出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    As we all know it a hero is someone who have courage and is not afraid to help out. There are many hero in our society such as police officers and firefighters. My hero is my grandfather which is hardworking smart inspired and full of energy. He retires from a company two months ago and now works as editor in a newspaper office. He still works hardly in his old age. My grandfather doesn’t give up easily. He often says “I will do that I can to contribute to my family and society." In my opinion our grandfather is really a man whom I should learn from.

Answer 1

1. . .. we all know it...   去掉 it2. . .. who have courage ...   have→has3. There are many hero ...   hero→heroes4. . .. which is hardworking...   which→ who5. . .. inspired and full...   inspired→ inspiring6. He retires from ...   retires →retired7. . .. works as editor ...   editor前加an8. . .. still works hardly ...   hardly→hard9. . .. do that I can ...   that→what / whatever   10. . .. our grandfather is ...   our→ my