求高手修改英文下面这段英文的公司简介有什么比如语法,单词等用的不妥的地方帮忙修改一下xxxCo.,Ltd.Isatechnicalserviceenterprise,whichprovidesthetechnicalserviceandthetechnicalconsultationaboutenvir

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求高手修改英文
下面这段英文的公司简介有什么比如语法,单词等用的不妥的地方帮忙修改一下
xxx Co.,Ltd.Is a technical service enterprise ,which provides the technical service and the technical consultation about environmental pollution control ,automatic continuous monitoring ,fluid control and seawater desalination.The company has specialized technical team ; pays attention to the development tendency of automatic monitors in domestic and foreign ; focus on the research and development of the new environmental monitoring technology .The company applied for and obtained the Environment protection facilities operations certificate ,and accumulated the massive experiences about the technology of environment continuous monitoring ,environmental pollution control ,fluid control and so on .we also achieved certain results.

Answer 1

没什么大问题,只是有两个地方,你看是不是需要改一下?
1、The company has specialized technical team.
应该家定冠词 "a" 应该是“has a team”吧?
2、We also achieved certain results.
整段文字的主语是“xxx Co.,Ltd.”,所以这儿我觉得不该是“We”,而应该是“It”比较合适.