新导航暑假巩固训练与衔接引导练习答案!1有急用

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新导航暑假巩固训练与衔接引导练习答案!1有急用

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Dear host family,
My parents think that I am clever,independent,with definite view but not bigotry.I can usually handle some affairs independently.And I am a kid full of passions,always ready to try my best to help others.In my schoolmate opinion,I am a person who makes to smile so much,and everybody can have fun with me,and I also like to play with each person.My hobby is extensive,so I can always find out a common topic with all classmates.I hope I can also get along very well with your family.
I have a 10-year-old younger brother,who is very naughty.
However we are not quite same in characters.I can control myself very well.
In my family,I am gentle.I can always stand on the most objective angle to think of problems.When my parents come into conflict,I always concentrate on how to slove it.And if I suffer any problems that I can not solve on my own ,I will ask my parents for help.
I like to play basketball,read novel and listen to music.
Usually I play basketball 6 times a week.In music,I like metal rock'n roll most ,but I will not miss other styles,either.
At school,I am a good student.My schoolmates often ask me some questions,and I am very glad to help them.I also take an active part in the activities held by our school.In the basketball team,I am a team leader.I led the team to win a game by our joint efforts,and made many friends in the team.
I think that I am a very kind person .I can get along very well with others.For example,when i arrive at a new place,I always say hello very politely to everyone ,and I can be a friend with my new classmates very soon,and everybody also likes me.When my friend has some problems,they often tell me,then I will sincerely help them to find the solution .If the difficulty appears in front of me,probably I will fear,but I will try to solve it alone.If I can't,I would ask others for help,and try my best to solve it.I usually go outside alone.I can take care of myself
by the ABC,I hope that my English will be improved,and we can get along with each other very well.Thank you for giving me this opportunity (my English is terrible ,so I want to improve it!)
Best wishes
Yours Sincerely
费了好大劲帮你把一些语法和表达上面的错误改过来了,不过有些意思你重复了,不知道是不是有字数的要求要凑够字数,所以没帮你弄这一块,如果没有建议你再精简一下.现在整篇文章基本没有什么语法和表达上的错误了.我07年英语专业毕业的,做过留学工作,想必你是要去国外的寄宿家庭吧?所以帮你改过的文章表达简单易懂一些,也符合欧美人的讲话习惯.祝你出国愉快,英语有所提高!