帮我的英语作文纠纠错MybestfriendDoyouhaveafriend?Yes,Ihave,hernameis123.123isabeautfulgirl.Shehasabigblackeyes,aredmouth,andashortblackhair.123alwayswaerawhitedressandapairoflightshose,shelookslikeAng

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帮我的英语作文纠纠错
My best friend
Do you have a friend?Yes,I have,her name is 123.
123 is a beautful girl.She has a big black eyes ,a red mouth,and a short black hair.123 always waer a white dress and a pair of light shose,she looks like Angle(安琪儿）
And she is a good and happy girl,too.We often go to school by bike.On the way,I feel happy when she told some funny story to me.I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too.
123 is my best friend ,Ilove my best friend.
希望大家在帮我纠正错误后能帮我把文章从打一遍,错误包括语法,单词等.
.I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too.
这句话的意思是：我高兴的时候她陪伴着我，我愤怒的时候他安慰着我

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Do you have a friend?Yes,(此处yes应该可以去掉,不然好象显的是在写2个人的对话似的) I have（HAVE改为DO）,her name is 123.
123 is a beautful girl.She has a（去掉A） big black eyes ,a red mouth,and a(去掉A) short black hair.123 always waer（拼写错误,应该是wear） a white dress and a pair of light shose（拼写错误,应该是shoes）,she looks like Angle(安琪儿）(ANGEL前面加an)
And she is a good and happy girl,too.We often go to school by bike.On the way,I feel happy when she told(前面用一般现在时,这里也应该用tells) some funny story to me.I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too.(这句话改为when i feel happy,she is with me;when i feel angry,she comforts me)
123 is my best friend ,Ilove my best friend.