“出师未捷身先死,长使英雄泪满襟”翻译成英文,帮我译的好点.

Question

“出师未捷身先死,长使英雄泪满襟”翻译成英文,帮我译的好点.

Answer 1

单句式
Sacrifice before achieving triumph when setting off always makes heroes sorrowful with tears afterward since antiquity.
复句式
Sacrifice was made yet triumph was not achieved when starting,
Such sorrow results always made heroes deeply sad ever since.