英语周报短文改错Thedaybeforeyesterday,Iwenttothebookstorewhereisnearourschooltobuythereference.ItwasSaturday,sotherehadmangypeople.withashopassistant'shelp,Iquicklygotthebook.Iwasbadlyinneed.Iwasabouttolea

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英语周报短文改错
The day before yesterday,I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy the reference.It was Saturday,so there had mangy people.with a shop assistant's help,I quickly got the book.I was badly in need.Iwas about to leave whule Ifound songmeone trying tosteal a man's money/nervous although I was,Itried to think of a way to help.Suddenly,a good idea struck on me.Istrpped on the man's foot deliberate.As expected,the man's scream gives,the thief a flight,who quickly walked out of the shop.After hear my explanation the man smiled and showed gread gratitude to me.
不容易啊、终于打完了、明天上午用呢、我只找了3个比较确定的.哪位英语高手给我做下给我个参考、感激不尽

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The day before yesterday,I went to the bookstore where（which） is near our school to buy the reference.It was Saturday,so there had（were） many people.with a shop assistant's help,I quickly got the book.I was badly （really）in need.Iwas about to leave whule（when） I found someone trying to steal a man's money/nervous although I was,Itried to think of a way to help（加上him）.Suddenly,a good idea struck on me.I stopped on the man's foot deliberate（deliberately）.As expected,the man's scream gives（gave）,the thief a flight,who quickly walked out of the shop.After hear（hearing） my explanation the man smiled and showed（expressed） great gratitude to me.
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