假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一

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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Kobe Bryant 37 played the final game of his 20-year career in April 14

2016 ends an era with five championships 18 All-Star appearances. He showed a

amazing 60 points in the 101-96 Lakers victory over the Utah Jazz where was

unbelievable. The crazily crowd had great expectations of the final score cheering

and shouted every time Bryant scored during his 42 minute.

After the game he was been given a microphone saying he couldn’t believe

how fast 20 years had gone by and it were absolutely crazy. He thought the most

important part is the whole team stayed together all the time through the ups and

downs.

Answer 1

Kobe Bryant 37 played the final game of his 20-year career in April 14 2016 ends an era with five championships 18 All-Star game appearances. He showed a amazing 60 points in the 101-96 Lakers victory over the Utah Jazz where was unbelievable. The crazily crowd had great expectations of the final score cheering and shouted every time Bryant scored during his 42 minute.

After the game he was been given a microphone saying he couldn’t believe how fast 20 years had gone by and it were absolutely crazy. He thought the most important part is the whole team stayed together all the time through the ups and downs.

答案：

① in 改为 on            ② ends 改为 ending         ③ a 改为 an

④ where 改为 which/that  ⑤ crazily 改为 crazy         ⑥ shouted 改为 shouting ⑦ minute 改为 minutes    ⑧ 删除 been               ⑨ were 改为 was

⑩ 在 is 后加 that