初三英语作文求修改!在线等,好的追分!intheseyear,myhometownhaschangedalot.inthepast,myhometownwassmallandthepeopleintherewereverypoorsotheirhouseswereold.pollutionwasserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.th

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初三英语作文求修改!在线等,好的追分!
in these year,my hometown has changed a lot.in the past,my hometown was small and the people in there were very poor so their houses were old.pollution was serious,and there was rubbish everywhere.the traffic was not convenient,so only few visitors come here sometimes.now great changes have taken place in our hometown.people's houses is bigger than before.and many people have their own car.so the traffic is convenient now!the mountains have turned greener,the rivers have turned clearer,the sky has turned bluer.what's more,many visitors come to my hometown for visiting fascinating sights.many people said that hometown's sights make them feel well.I believe that my hometown will become better and better in the future!i love my hometown so much.

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你的英语作文写得很好,语言优美,形象生动,描绘了自己家乡的变化.但是也有一些小瑕疵,我把直接改好的写在下面,你参考一下
In these years,my hometown has changed a lot.In the past,my hometown was a small town where the people were so poor that their houses were old.Pollution was serious,and there was rubbish everywhere.The transportation was not convenient,so only a few visitors came here occasionally.But now great changes have taken place in our hometown.People's houses are bigger than before.And many people have their own cars.so the transportation is convenient and the trafic is clearnow!The mountains have turned greener,the rivers have turned clearer,the sky has turned bluer.What's more,many visitors come to my hometown for visiting fascinating sights every year.Many people said that my hometown's sights made them feel better.I believe that my hometown will become better and better in the future!I love my hometown so much.I warm-heartedly wecome you to my hometown.
主要是有些单词单复数不明,还有的词汇需要改动,如trafic 指交通的流量,状态等,而你文中提到的是交通的运输方式,最好用transportation,其它的还好.

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