请大家帮我修改一下（英语）速请英文大虾帮改一下．包括语法上的问题,语句的通顺,单词拼写,Dearforeignfriends:Hi!WelcometoChina!HappyValentine’sDayinadvance!Doyouwanttobuysomethingforyourlover?Doy

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请大家帮我修改一下（英语）
速请英文大虾帮改一下．包括语法上的问题,语句的通顺,单词拼写,
Dear foreign friends:
Hi!Welcome to China!
Happy Valentine’s Day in advance!
Do you want to buy something for your lover?
Do you want to give her/him a surprise?
Do you want to have a sweet night?
Look at this!
Valentine’s Day Roses Ordered!
Here’s the price:
1.per rose:￥8
2.11 to 12 roses:￥85
3.20 roses:￥150 …
the more the cheaper
If you want to buy the roses,please call the phone:by the end of 2007-2-13
敬候您的佳音
We hope you have a great Valentine’s Day!
Sincerely,mary
"敬候您的佳音"也要翻的

Answer 1

Dear friends:
Welcome to China!
Happy Valentine’s Day in advance!
Want to buy something for your lover?
Want to give her/him a surprise?
Want to have a sweet valentine's night?
Look!
Valentine's Day Roses !
Here’s the price:
1.1-10 rose:￥8 each
2.11 to 12 roses:￥85
3.20 roses:￥150 …
the more you order,the cheaper it is
Interested parties please call:____________ (添电话号码）
by 2007-2-13,________ (添时间,如:12pm 之类）
敬候您的佳音:We hope to hear from you soon
We hope you have a great Valentine’s Day!
(其实没错,不过之前用了“we hope" 所以可以改成：Here’s wishing you a great Valentine’s Day!）
Sincerely,mary