急、下星期我就要我讲短文改错了,可以帮我这篇短文改错帮我改下错么,最重要的是改错的解析、感激不尽DearMaryIreceiveyourE-mailjustnow.Don'tworryaboutme.I'mgettingonweiiwith

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急、下星期我就要我讲短文改错了,可以帮我 这篇短文改错帮我改下错么 ,最重要的是改错的解析、感激不尽
Dear Mary

I receive your E-mail just now . Don't worry about me. I'm getting on weii with my research work in the lab .But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English . Thereason is because you have not donme well in it recently and you hanve lost intersts. I'm afraid I could't agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English , and English is widely used in the world today . It will be important tool in our future work . Beside , it is becoming more and more important in our daily life .If you study hard ,you will be succeed .Do remember there were there ia a will , there ia a way .I 'm looking forwaring good hearing good newa from you .

Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

1.receive--received
(just now刚刚,为过去时间,故改成过去式)
2.greatly--great
(surprise为名词,修饰名词应用形容词great)
3.learn--learning
(give up doing sth.放弃做某事,是固定搭配)
4.because--that
(主语为The reason时,其表语从句用that引导)
5.could't--can't
(表示"现在不能同意",故用现在式can't)
6.difficulty(名词)--difficult(做表语用形容词difficult)
7.and--but(英语很难学,但是使用范围广,表转折,故改成but)
8.important前加an.(因为tool为可名单,其前面要用不定冠词,
并且是在元音开头的单词important前,故用an)
9.Beside--Besides
(此处表示递进关系,故用Besides.意为"此外,而且",
Beside在...旁边)
10.succeed--successful或去掉be
(作表语用形容词successful或用succeed作谓动,就去掉be)
后面这两个可能是打字时出现的笔误:
11.there were--that where(that引导宾从,
where there is a will ,there is a way.有志者,事竟成.)
12.good--to(look forward to doing sth.盼望/期待做某事)
其它笔误:could't--couldn't,ia--is,newa--news