英语改错,十处ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwanttoloseweightbydieting.itisnaturalthatyounggirlsatyouragehopestolookbeaautiful.andinmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeantydonotletothers'

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英语改错,十处
i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'ideas to affrct your normal life.if youdo want to lose wejght,it is good idea to do it by taking more will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on diteing.
i hope my advices will be helpful to you and i'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

Answer 1

want —wanted
hopes—hope
and —but
to affect—to 删除
it is good idea—a good idea
taking more —加exercises 再从exercises后加which
help us —us 改成you
advices—advice
hear from—hearing
忘记写了,我自己改的,断句,打出来的东西有点问题,