这是我写的作文我不知道哪些错误能帮我改改吗?BeingpoliteI’llmeetnewpeople.howshouldmeetnewpeople.Ithink:shouldIshakehandsshouldIhugthem.IfellIshouldshakehands.I'llanswerthephone.howshouldIansw

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这是我写的作文 我不知道哪些错误 能帮我改改吗?
Being polite
I’ll meet new people .how should meet new people .I think :should I shake hands should I hug them .I fell I should shake hands .I 'll answer the phone .how should I answer the phone I think :should I say "Hello" should I take a message I fell I should say "Hello"and take a message.I well walk on busy streets .How should I walk on busy streets .I think :should I say :"excuse me should I Push I fell I should say :"excuse me " I 'll wait for a bus .I should line up .
look ,they all do of very good .listen they say is very good too

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how should I meet new people缺主语
I well walk on 改为I will ```
listen they say is very good too这句如果是“听他们说话也很好”的意思,我建议改为
listen what they say is····