英语翻译甲方应在相应月份（简称D月）的25日之前以电子邮件或传真方式向乙方提供符合‘1-1’要求的(D+2)月确定订单和(D+2)月后2个月的预计需要量.确定的订单由甲方和乙方确认内容后即可

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英语翻译
甲方应在相应月份（简称D月）的25日之前以电子邮件或传真方式向乙方提供符合‘1-1’要求的(D+2)月确定订单和(D+2)月后2个月的预计需要量.确定的订单由甲方和乙方确认内容后即可生效.
1..Party Ashall provide .Party B with an order sheet described above 1-1,with three(3) month’s forecast by 25th day of previous month of shipment through e-mail and by facsimile transmission and others.This order sheet shall come into effect from the time when .Party A and Party Bconfirm the contents thereof.
2.Party A shall provide Party B,via email or facsimile before the 25th day of certain month (Month D),with the confirmed order of Month (D+2) as 1-1 requires and the estimated demand two months after Month (D+2).The confirmed order shall become effect after confirmed by Party A and Party B.

Answer 1

2更加好一点,不过最后一句BECOME EFFECT不对,应该用1里面的COME INTO EFFECT的表述.