英语短文改错,改十处,I'mnowonholidayattheCoastalHotel,whichisanicehotelbytheseaside.Ontheyardthere'sabigswimmingpools.Fromthehotelwindowsyoucanseethesea.TheCoastalHotelofferedgoodfoodandownsanicebar,eit

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英语短文改错,改十处,
I'm now on holiday at the Coastal Hotel ,which is a nice hotel by the seaside.On the yard there's a big swimming pools.From the hotel windows you can see the sea.The Coastal Hotel offered good food and owns a nice bar,either.The employees here are friendly and helpful.The holiday offers various activities,which i think is the more satisfactory hotel.This is what i did:i went sailing in the sea on Monday.And on the Monday evening i saw a new film Rio.On Tuesday i had a coach trip an old town,which is a popular place of interest and in the evening i went to a disco party,when i relaxed myself quite well.It's the most enjoyable holiday i have never had.I like it here very much that i've already decided that i must come again next year.

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I'm now on holiday at the Coastal Hotel ,which is a nice hotel by the seaside.
On the yard there's a big swimming pools（.改为pool）
From the hotel windows you can see the sea.
The Coastal Hotel offered（offers） good food and owns a nice bar,（either）（.改为too）
The employees here are friendly and helpful.
The holiday（改为hotel） offers various activities,which i think is the more satisfactory hotel（改为holiday）.
This is what i did:i went sailing in（on） the sea on Monday.
And on the Monday evening i saw a new film Rio.
On Tuesday i had a coach trip （in） an old town,which is a popular place of interest and in the evening i went to a disco party,when（where） i relaxed myself quite well.
It's the most enjoyable holiday i have never（改为ever） had.
I like it （here） very much that i've already decided that i must come again next year.（去掉here）
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