假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I'm Wang Hong a international student of Beijing University. I have something to talk with you. During last year’s winter holiday I go shopping with my classmates. While we were walking on the street we saw several beggar standing on the road and asking for money. Many of them were disabling which made me feel very much sad. Among them were old people young people and even children. I noticed some passers-by ignore them instead of given them money. When I wanted to help them my classmates stopped my. They told me whether these beggars were not worth showing mercy to because most them cheated people. Should I helped them?

Answer 1

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                 an

you. During last year’s winter holiday I go shopping with my classmates. While we were

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walking on the street we saw several beggar standing on the road and asking for money. Many

                              beggars

of them were disabling which made me feel very much sad. Among them were old people

           disabled

young people and even children. I noticed some passers-by ignore them instead of given them

                                                                  giving

money. When I wanted to help them my classmates stopped my. They told me whether these

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beggars were not worth showing mercy to because most∧them cheated people. Should I helped

of                         help

them?