英语作文找错麻烦看下我写错了不Ilovesunglasses,beacuseIthinkIloolcoolwithsunglasses.Ilikethewatch,beacuseitcantellmethetime,Ican'tstandthescarf,beacuseitisforgirls.Idon'tlikethekeyring,beacuseit'sali

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英语作文找错
麻烦看下我写错了不
I love sunglasses ,beacuse I think I lool cool with sunglasses.I like the watch ,beacuse it can tell me the time,I can't stand the scarf ,beacuse it is for girls.I don't like the key ring,beacuse it's a little heavy for me .And the coolst thing was the belt.Everyone loves it!

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这是你自己写的吗?这样写有点罗嗦哟.句型都是一样的.
I lool cool ----I look cool
coolst thing ----coolest thing
我觉得你可以这样写：
I like sunglasses and watch ,because the sunglasses can make me cool ,the watch can tell me the time .I don't like key ring,it's a little bit heavy for me ,and the scarf is a terrible thing for me ,I think girls like it .The coolest thing is belt ,I think everyone may like it !