英语作文找错有10处错误之处.OneSundaymorning,mymotherandiwenttothewestlaketogetherhappy.wherewefoundagirlcryinginacorner.mumandiwentuptohim.askingwhathernamewasbutwhereshelived.shecouldn'tgivetheanswer

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英语作文找错
有10处错误之处.
One Sunday morning,my mother and i went to the west lake together happy.where we found a girl crying in a corner.mum and i went up to him.asking what her name was but where she lived.she couldn't give the answer,so we have to send her to the police station of the park,where she was taken good care .The news of the girl was being broadcast quickly .after some in came the paper of the girl .they were exciting to see their daughter .then we said good-bye to each other.
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