英语演讲稿,快帮我修改下,英语演讲稿,快帮我修改下,中间衔接的地方润色下,在帮我想一个不一样一点的结尾,还可以写点什么.而且有加分滴Goodmoring,teachers.I’mverygladtostandhereandgiveyou

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英语演讲稿,快帮我修改下,
英语演讲稿,快帮我修改下,中间衔接的地方润色下,在帮我想一个不一样一点的结尾,还可以写点什么.而且有加分滴Good moring ,teachers .I’m very glad to stand here and give you a shor speech.Now let me introduce myself.My name is LILY.I' studying in Grade Eight at XXschool .i am a girl who loves dreaming.ihad done many colourful childhood dreams .When i am free ,i usually watch movies .I like (alices adventures in wonderland) and(harry potter ) harry potter and alice are brave and clever .and i hope i can as braveas them one day .i often dreamed i adventureed with alice and harry potter .It's very interesting and adventurous.

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Good morning teachers.I'm very glad to stand here to give you a short speech.Now please let me introduce myself first.My name is Lily.I'm a student in Grade 8 at ^^^school.I am a girl who loves dreaming.I've had many colorful dreams in my childhood.When I am not busy,I usually watch movies,Alice's Adventure in Wonderland and Harry Potter are my favourate.Harry and Alice are both brave and clever.And I hope I can be as brave as they are someday.I often dream to have an adventure with Alice and Harry Potter.It's very interesting and fantastic.