请问这个段落,有哪些语法错误或其它错误.JackFriedhammwasborntoNewYorkinOctober25,1965.Hebeganschoolattheageofsixandcontinueduntilhewas18years.HethenwenttoNewYorkUniversitytolearnMedicine.HedecidedonM

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请问这个段落,有哪些语法错误或其它错误.
Jack Friedhamm was born to New York in October 25,1965.He began
school at the age of six and continued until he was 18 years.He
then went to New York University to learn Medicine.He decided on
Medicine because he liked bioligy when he was at school.While he
was to University he met his wife Cindy.Cindy was a beautiful
woman with hair long black.They went along for yeers before they
decided getting married.Jack began to work like a doctor as soon
as he graduated to Medical School.They had two children named
Jackie and Peter ,and have lived in Queens since the past two
years ,Jack is very interested painting and likes to paint
portraits of his sun Peter.

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改正：Jack Friedhamm was born in New York on October 25, 1965. He began school at the age of six and continued until he was 18 years old. He then went to New York University to learn Medicine. He decided on Medicine because he liked biology when he was at school. While he was at University, he met his wife Cindy. Cindy was a beautiful woman with long black hair. They went out for years before they decided to get married. Jack began to work as a doctor as soon as he had graduated from Medical School. They have had two children named Jackie and Peter, and have lived in Queens for the past two years. Jack is very interested in painting and likes to paint portraits of his son Peter.