请大侠帮小弟改一下英语语法错误Itcanbeobservedinthepicturethatthereisahenwithaprideface.ThereisalsoaphraseinitshandsaysthatIpromisetheeggswhichIhavelaidwithoutcornerandhavingskin,whiteandyolk.Asis

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请大侠帮小弟改一下英语语法错误
It can be observed in the picture that there is a hen with a pride face.There is also a phrase in its hand says that I promise the eggs which I have laid without corner and having skin,white and yolk.As is indicate that a large of companies is promising for their goods by this way .
Obviously,we can deduce from the picture that one important function of the words you said is less powerful than action,never talking more than what one should do,and this helps him to gain the experience of what is worth to do.For example,when we are in examination before doing the test,the teacher requires us to write a paper about never cheating in the examination.If we were writing the paper,we would cook our own goose.However,there are many explaining about those requirement making people to promise for what they ought to do.
Considering all these reasons why some people commit to the others for the things they should do,we could recognize that there are several points in need:first and foremost,we should have done well for what we ought to do; second,it's unnecessary to say a lot about what you must to do.Despite all these factors,everyone must do their parts without talking first.

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As is indicate that a large of companies is promising for their goods by this way .有问题,能猜出你想说什么,as an indicaion that.a large number of(你的nmber是打掉了还是就是记成这样的）
we can deduce from the picture that one important function of the words you said is less powerful than action,never talking more than what one should do：said时态用错了,用一般现在时,你说的是客官事实.
here are many explaining about those requirement making people to promise for what they ought to do(explain名词形式为explanlation.还有make的用法,使意动词后面接省to的不定式.to 去掉
we should have done well for what we ought to do：这里最好不要用虚拟语气,直接we should do well for what we ought to do.
水平有限,能找到的 就这些了哦.