我写的英语作文我写了一段英语用软件翻译了一下这里有什么错的?2008年十月底,某国西南部森林发生了一场大火.在数千名消防队员及当地居民的帮助下,持续三个月的大火终于被扑灭.这场

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我写的英语作文
我写了一段英语 用软件翻译了一下 这里有什么错的?
2008年十月底,某国西南部森林发生了一场大火.在数千名消防队员及当地居民的帮助下
,持续三个月的大火终于被扑灭.这场大火造成9人死亡.约80多人受伤,直接经济损失2000多万远.同时它也震惊了全国.追究原因,是一青年工人吸烟,随意将未熄灭的烟蒂仍掉
By the end of October 2008,a country in a fire took place in southwestern forests.In the thousands of firefighters and local residents with the help of
,Last three months of the fire was finally extinguished.The fire caused nine people were killed.About 80 people were injured and direct economic losses of more than 2000 million Yuan.But it also shocked the whole country.Look for the reasons,is a young workers smoking,At random will not extinguish the cigarette butt is still out

Answer 1

At the end of Oct 2008.The deadly bushfires were raged through the forest south-western area of the country.
2008年十月底,某国西南部森林发生了一场大火
Firefighters and local residents in the realm of thousands were trying to combat the flame.They had eventually found success from the battle after 3 months.
在数千名消防队员及当地居民的帮助下,持续三个月的大火终于被扑灭.
The fire caused 9 people died and about 80 people injuried.
这场大火造成9人死亡.约80多人受伤.
Futhermore,the fire not only razed the forest where the total accumulated loss was estimated about 20 million dollars,but also alerted people to claim for the causes of this disaster.
直接经济损失2000多万远.同时它也震惊了全国.
After investigations,they concluded the bushfires were sparked by unextinguished cigarette that thrown by the teenage smoker.
追究原因,是一青年工人吸烟,随意将未熄灭的烟蒂仍掉
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Comments:
Firstly,I suggest you do not use any kind of machine-translations.The reason is clear,the output of the translation is not readable at all.
Secondly,the structure of your chinese script is not that coherent.Thus,I try to split it into sentance and translate it with some modifications.
Finally,I strongly recommend you write by your own hand.There is no shortcut for learning English.
Cheers :)