英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,MyNewFriendThisismynewfriendMary.SheisAmerican,butshelivesinBeijingwithherparentsnow.Sheis12yearsold,andinClassTwoGradeSeven.Wearegoodf

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英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,
My New Friend
This is my new friend Mary.She is American,but she lives in Beijing with her parents now.She is 12 years old,and in Class Two Grade Seven.We are good friends.
I often eat meals with Mary and her parents,she likes eat dumplings for breakfast; meat,rice and vegetables for lunch; for supper,she likes eating noodles.She likes eating Chinese foods very much.

Answer 1

SHE IS AN AMERCIAN. 要有冠词.
SHE IS 12 YEARS OLD AND SHE IS IN CLASS TWO GRADE SEVEN. AND 后跟完整句子
一般用 HAVE MEALlS
SHE LIKES EATING 一般LIKE TO DO STH OR LIKE DOING STH
标点符号运用有错误.
FOR DINNER 比较正规