英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,Hello,myfirstnameisBobandlastnameisBrown,canyouguessmyname?Yes,mynameisBobBrown.I’m13yearsoldandI’mfromCanada.IcanspeakEnglishanda

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英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,
Hello,my first name is Bob and last name is Brown,can you guess my name?Yes,my name is Bob Brown.I’m 13 years old and I’m from Canada.I can speak English and a little French.My favorite sport is football and my favorite movie is The Promise.There are five members in my family,my mother,my father,my brother Jack,my sister Amy and me.Do you want to be my friend?

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Hello,my first name is Bob and (my) last name is Brown.(Can) can you guess my (full) name?Yes,my (full) name is Bob Brown.I’m 13 years old and I’m from Canada.I can speak English and a little French.My favorite sport is football and my favorite movie is The Promise.There are five members in my family:my mother,my father,my brother Jack,my sister Amy and me.Do you want to be my friend?
其他的真的没发现什么错误.感觉很简单明了.