精通英语进.theworldkissedmewiththesadness,forsingingbymeinreturn.thewouldhaskissedmewithitspain,askingforitsreturninsongs.以上两句有没有什么语法错误?哪句更好些?

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精通英语进.
the world kissed me with the sadness ,for singing by me in return .
the would has kissed me with its pain ,asking for its return in songs .
以上两句有没有什么语法错误?哪句更好些?

Answer 1

i'm asking for the world's return by singing,though it kissed me with the sorrow .
kiss是瞬发动词,不能用完成时.