英语读后感修改企鹅英语简易读物里的凯伦与艺术家读后感修改时间很短错误很多AreviewonKarenandtheArtistThisbooktellusainterestingstory,Itisaboutagirlandaboy.ThegirlcalledKaren.Sheisanairhostess

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英语读后感修改
企鹅英语简易读物里的凯伦与艺术家读后感修改
时间很短错误很多
A review on Karen and the Artist
This book tell us a interesting story,It is about a girl and a boy.The girl called Karen.She is an airhostess and she has been to many places.Once when she in Rome,she goes to a café .And sees some beautiful pictures on the wall.She likes the pictures .So she asks the barman who draw it .And the barman tell she that a man go to his café to eat foods and drink.But never give him money.He only give him some pictures .And by chance the man comes into the café .And want to eat and drink .The barman don’t give him some food because he has no money,only a picture .But Karen likes his pictures .And know the man is very poor .So she decides to sell his pictures for him.But no one buy his pictures .Because no one know he.And Karen sees a man sell picture with a sentence:This is XXX’s picture.He’s got an exhibition at the XXX in XXX.So in this way Karen sell some pictures by this man and gets some money for this poor artist.
After reading it .I know the community is very much false .even though no matter how good your opus.but also need honor.To Da Vinci's little-known work give to a art galleries,may also be unwanted.
希望不只是一句话，能具体的改一改，

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A review on Karen and the Artist
This book told us an interesting story about a girl and a boy.The girl was called Karen.She was an airhostess and she had been to many places.Once when she was in Rome,she went to a café ,and saw some beautiful pictures on the wall.She liked the pictures so much that she asked the barman who had draw them.And the barman told her that a man often went to his café to have foods and drinks.But he never payed him money.He only gave him some pictures .And at that time,that man just came in,and wanted to eat and drink .The barman didn't give him any food because he had no money,but only a picture .But Karen liked his pictures .And she realized that the man was very poor .So she decided to sell his pictures for him.But no one wanted to buy his pictures,because he was not famous.And Karen found a person selling pictures marked with a sentence“This is XXX’s picture”.He’s got an exhibition at the XXX in XXX.So Karen also sold the pictures in that way and got some money for the poor artist.
After reading it,I consider the society very unfair.No matter how telented you are,you can't succeed without fame.If one of Da Vinci's unknown works is signed with an unfamous artist,it may also be rejected.
大致改了下.话说那个XXX记得改掉哈.