英语作文：今天是星期天,你和同学参观北京动物园,请用英语写一篇日记,继续今天的经历.必须用到finesunbeijingzooanimalssointerestingsomeforeignvisitorsthrow这些词.不少于70词看好！七十分了，

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英语作文：今天是星期天,你和同学参观北京动物园,请用英语写一篇日记,继续今天的经历.
必须用到fine sun beijing zoo animals so interesting some foreign visitors throw 这些词.
不少于70词
看好！七十分了，加了五十分！给我来个长一点的行吗？

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Today is a nice sunday ,I feel very happy ,because i 'll with my friend to visit the zoo .
when we use halfhour to find one's way to the zoo .Because it's Sunday,so a lot of tourist in the zoo .we walk a round the zoo ,we not find any animal is attracted we very much.suddenly find A monkey swings on the tree ,just for a moment a lot of people come to see this lovable little monkey ,we want take pictures with this little monkey ,we find a foreign friend take pictures for us.
We have transferred a meeting in the zoo ,we leave the zoo at 12 O ' clock .Today is my favorite day
还有一个：
Early Sunday morning I go to the zoo,I'll go with him the helpless,the zoo is not far from my home,we just can arrive half an hour to walk,the weather is good,tourists also pretty much,we love the monkey monkey,but also very interested in us,where there are many foreigners,I still made many foreign friends,they are very enthusiastic,we play until noon home from the morning but into the noon time really happy
如果高级别一点,这个是用过去时写的：
We spent about half hour in walking.However,good weather made us really happy and comfortable.As we expected,there has been a lot of people when we arrived there.Monkeys looked interesting.They run and jumped everywhere they can.Lukily,we met couples of foreigners.I did not waste chance to talk with them for a while.