英语日记.请英语高手指教出错误,并提出来怎样改.October1stMondayRainTodayisNationalDay.Wewereveryhappy.Becausewewillhaveaseven-dayholiday.Theweatherwasbad,itrained.andIarrivedinTianjinwas5:45AM.Itwasver

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英语日记.请英语高手指教出错误,并提出来怎样改.
October 1st Monday Rain
Today is National Day .We were very happy.Because we will have a seven-day holiday.The weather was bad ,it rained.and I arrived in Tianjin was 5:45 AM.It was very early .Tianjin was raining then.
The Train station is near from my home .So I got home at 6:10 AM.
When I got home ,my grandparents have been up .They were waiting me .I was very glad to see them.
My grandmother cooked some delicious food for lunch for me .
We wen to restaurant for dinner.
Today I was very happy.But I think of I will leave on Oct 6th as soon as I was very sad.Tomorrow I will go to the Water Park.Good bye.
Betty

Answer 1

日记是写过去的事,整个时态都要用过去式.
Today is National Day __is改为was
we will have a seven__will改为would
in Tianjin was__was改为at修饰时间用AT
Train station is near from__is改为was,from在这里多余,去掉
my grandparents have been up__have改为had
Today I was very happy__这里说的是事实也是直到写日记时还存在的感觉所以was改为is
But I think of I will leave on Oct 6th as soon as I was very sad__of在这里多余,去掉,was改为is