检查一下这段英文是否正确I'msosorrytohearthatyourbungowasgone.IloveanimalstooespeciallytinylittletameonesbutInevertriedtokeepanyanimals.MaybethistimeIwilltryitandgiveitmylove.I'msojalousthatyouhave

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检查一下这段英文是否正确
I'm so sorry to hear that your bungo was gone.I love animals too especially tiny little tame ones but I never tried to keep any animals.Maybe this time I will try it and give it my love.
I'm so jalous that you have so many animals around you while I even haven't seen a sheep actually.You are so lucky that you have so many animal friends.

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I'm so sorry to hear that your bunny was gone.I love animals too especially tiny little tame ones but I have never tried to keep any animals.Maybe this time I will give it a try and give it my love.
I'm so jealous that you have so many animals around you while I haven't even seen a real sheep.You are so lucky that you have so many animal friends.