这一句哪里有语法问题?Inaddition,insteadofconsideringtheclassicsasrubbishwhichareuseless,weshouldtakeaccountabilitytoprotecttheminanicewayinthatwithoutclassicsourliveswouldnotbeasfineasthoseofnow.

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这一句哪里有语法问题?
In addition,instead of considering the classics as rubbish which are useless,we should take accountability to protect them in a nice way in that without classics our lives would not be as fine as those of now.

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有几个错,但不一定都是语法上的,有些是用词不当.
take accountability to 常用在法律方面,应改为：take responsibility to ...
in that 有为什么的意思,但用在这里不妥,应改为：because
as fine as those of now "of"不需要,as fine as those now 就可以.