帮忙改一下这篇雅思作文,有好多错误,但自己不会改Nowadays,almosteveryschoolstudentwhoarenoisyanddisobedient.Andtheissueonwhetherthesestudentsshouldbeseparatedhasbecomecontroversial.Someparents、teachersan

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帮忙改一下这篇雅思作文,有好多错误,但自己不会改
Nowadays ,almost every school student who are noisy and disobedient. And the issue on whether these students should be separated has become controversial. Some parents 、teachers and students assert that noisy student should be separated because they have a bad effect on other students ,while others argue that noisy student have their own character , we should treat them as normal students. For my part, I am in favor of the latter view. Although noisy students sometimes are boring, they have their self-respect. They can’t understand that they are separated from others. It is observe that they are bad students. They will become more and more unconfidence. They will lose their confidence to study.
Besides, putting theses students together with others will good for them learn from others on study. Learning with the good students they will recognize their own problems step by step. In this study environment, they will be influenced by others. Everyone was born loving study, because of different reasons, some people gave up it. So every school should give the chance and environment to these students to learn better.
Of course, there are some advantages of separating these students from others. They can’t feel inferior on study; they have their own space to do other things. No one will look down on them. At the same time, it will offer a better study environment for other students.
In the final analysis, although some people suggest that separating noisy students from other s and there really have some advantages of it. I still insist on my opinion. Treating these students as normal students. Finding out their virtues and encouraging them. Schools should have this study environment: harmony, friendly and helpful

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Nowadays,almost every school student who is noisy and disobedient.