帮忙瞅一眼,这几句英语对话语法什么的正确么?A:Whatareyougoingtodotomorrow?B:Iusuallygofishingwithmydadwhentheweatherisfine.Howaboutyou?A:Ihavenothing.ButafterIhavefinishedmyhomework,Ifitisstille

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帮忙瞅一眼,这几句英语对话语法什么的正确么?
A: What are you going to do tomorrow?
B: I usually go fishing with my dad when the weather is fine. How about you?
A: I have nothing. But after I have finished my homework, If it is still early then I will go and date with my girlfriend.
B: Have you got a girlfriend? Maybe I need to find a girl friend too. What should I do?
A: Well I think you should get rid of fishlike smell.
B: Alright. What shall do next?
A: Next, get changed before you go meeting with the girl.
B: I agree with you.
A: And I think you need have your haircut. it looks messy.
B: I don't really want to have a haircut. I think it's good.
A: Alright. Maybe only the fish just like your explosive hair. Then you need buy a car and test a driver's license.
我想写的最后一句意思是：或许只有鱼才喜欢你的爆炸头。并不是说他的头发像鱼

Answer 1

A: What are you going to do tomorrow?
B: I usually go fishing with my dad when the weather is fine. How about you? (你问明天的打算,却回答通常干什么)
A: I have nothing. （汉语习惯,你想说没有特别打算,却成了我一无所有）But after I have finished my homework, If it is still early then I will go and date with my girlfriend（意思明白了）.
B: Have you got a girlfriend? Maybe I need to find a girl friend too. What should I do?
A: Well I think you should get rid of fishlike smell（嘻嘻,说人难闻英语中是很不礼貌的）.
B: Alright. What shall do next?
A: Next, get changed before you go meeting with the girl（怎样变?变成什么样）.
B: I agree with you.
A: And I think you need have your haircut. it looks messy.
B: I don't really want to have a haircut. I think it's good.
A: Alright. Maybe only the fish just like your explosive hair. Then you need （to ）buy a car and test a driver's license.（不错了,语法还好.要注意英语的语言习惯,文化习惯.对话可以生动些.下文仅作参考）
A: What are you going to do tomorrow?
B: I will go fishing with my dad if the weather is fine. How about you?
A: I 'm not sure. Maybe I will date with my girlfriend if it's not too late when I finish my homework.
B: Have you got a girlfriend? Maybe I need to find a girl friend too. It's not easy...What should I do?
A: Well I think you should get rid of the fishlike smell.
B: Alright.And...next?
A: And you'd better have a haircut . uhhh...it looks messy.
B: ButI don't think so.I think it's cool.
A: Maybe . Or maybe the fish will like your explosive hair. . .just kidding .
If you bought a car and got a driver's license,you would become a hero and girls after you everywhere...(用虚拟语气比较委婉)