这段话有没有语法错误,请帮我改正一下,Thisishisfamilyphotol,look!Ontheleftaretwopeople,theyarehisparents.ontherighttheyarehisauntandhisgrandefather,thepeopleinblackandwhiteishiscousin,thelittlepeopieish

Question

这段话有没有语法错误,请帮我改正一下,
This is his family photol,look!On the left are two people,they are his parents.on the right theyare his aunt and his grande father,the people in black and white is his cousin,the little peopie is his brother.The people in blue is he.

Answer 1

photo 不是 photol
left和right后加side好一点
the little peole 改成 the little boy
最后一个he 改成 himself
还有,别用people 用person好一点（全文）
按顺序看吧