帮忙改一篇英语作文!急apersonwhohelpedmealotthereisaperson,whohelpedmealot.sheismymother.sheiskindandattentive.iloveherverymuch.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday.shemadedeliciousfoodforme,but

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帮忙改一篇英语作文!急
a person who helped me a lot
there is a person,who helped me a lot.she is my mother.she is kind and attentive.i love her very much.once i had i fever.she looked after me night and day.she made delicious food for me,but her meals wasn't as well as mine.if she didn't take care of me such great,i wouldn't get well such quickly.besides that,she sends me to school every day .and she has to get up early to prepare breakfast.i still remenber one thing.last term,i told her thati didn't get good grades in the Chinese test.instead of getting angry on me,she soothed me.(……）
All in all then,she helped me a lot.and she brought me happiness and power.
括号内要加一句话……

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1.once i had i fever.she looked after me night and day
had i fever改为had a fever
点号改为逗号
night and day改为day and night
2.if she didn't take care of me such great,i wouldn't get well such quickly.
这里应该是虚拟语气
didn't take改为hadn't taken
wouldn't get改为wouldn't have got
3.besides that
应去掉that
4.and she has to get up early to prepare breakfast.
这里and应该为so
5.getting angry on me
angry改为anger
on改为with
6.最后一句时态应是一般现在时
（she said that everything would go well soon.）