我回了老外一封邮件,请问像我这样子回可以吗,有表达和语法上面的错误吗,DearSirWedeemitanhonourtoreceiveyouinquire,Iwillsentaquotationtoyoumailboxintoday,andkindlytellyou,wehavealot'sofhandlesfor

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我回了老外一封邮件,请问像我这样子回可以吗,有表达和语法上面的错误吗,
Dear Sir
We deem it an honour to receive you inquire,I will sent a quotation to you mailbox in today,and kindly tell you,we have a lot's of handles for choose.let's talk detail in email.

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呵呵首先我不认识DEEM这个词,有道了下……不知道你这个老外是不是需要GOOGLE下?:)
Today前面可以吧in 去了的,mailbox 前应该是your,不过这个都无伤大雅,老外看懂就行.
这只是抛砖引玉,接下来要把你们的handles准备发给他们,这才是他关注的哦!