麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）Sincethepresenceoftelevision,ourimaginationofdigitalworldhasmoreandmoreapproachingbecomingtrue.我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界

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麻烦看一下这个句子的语病（07年六级写作）
Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has more and more approaching becoming true.
我原本的意思是“自从电视出现后,我们想象中的数字化世界已经越来越接近实现.”但我感觉more and more approaching 恐怕不能这么用.麻烦给我看看.

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Since the presence of television,our imagination of digital world has increasingly approached the reality.