英语高手进,看看有没有语法错误关于世博会：ThethemeoftheexpoofshanghaiisBettercity,betterlife.Itlikesabigbanquet.It'sbustlingandthevisitorsvisitorderly.TherearesomanycountriesjioninlikeDenmark、Germany

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英语高手进,看看有没有语法错误
关于世博会：
The theme of the expo of shanghai is Better city,better life.
It likes a big banquet .It's bustling and the visitors visit orderly.
There are so many countries jion in like Denmark 、Germany 、France、Poland and so on.
Expo 2010 will makes peace and development ,each other urge and advance together.
第二、三句话应该是这样的：
It likes a big banquet .All of the visitors are orderly .
There are so many countries like Denmark 、Germany and so on join in our expo.

Answer 1

jion --> join
will makes --> make
其他也对喔
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