初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用关于寒假计划的WinterVacationiscoming.ThistimeIwanttodosomethingmeaningful.I'mgoingtospendanhourreadingeveryday.BecauseIwanttolearnnewthingsfromthebooks.Ithinkitisthemo

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初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用
关于寒假计划的
Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn new things from the books.I think it is the most important things to learn.And I think have a strong body is as important as we learn.So I'm going to eat an apple a day,because an apple a day keep the doctor away.This is my winter vacation's resolution.That sounds really great.I can't wait it.

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Winter Vacation is coming.
This time I want to do something meaningful.
I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.
Because I want to learn new things from the books.
I think it is the most important thing to learn.
And I think having a strong body is as important as our learning.
So I'm going to eat an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
This is my winter vacation's plan.
That sounds really great.I can't wait for it.
呃.以上改正了语法错误.以下润色下表达,以供参考.
Winter Vacation is just around the corner.
This time I want to do something meaningful.
I'm going to spend an hour reading every day because I want to learn new things from the books.
I think learning is such an important thing.
And I also think having a strong body is as important as our learning.
So I'm going to have an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away,as the saying is（就像俗话说的）.
This is my winter vacation's plan.
That sounds so great that I can't wait for it.